Glenda Crosling
Language Development
in a Business Faculty in Higher Education: A Concurrent Approach
ABSTRACT
This
article draws on the
principle that
language development programs are most effective when contextualized to
the setting for which the language is required. It considers written
language development in higher education for international students,
whose first language is not English. In the context of a business
faculty, the program explored in this article discusses the findings
from a study of the expectations of teachers in the faculty, in terms
of their students’ writing. The ‘indicators’ that emerge from the study
are interpreted in terms of values of the business faculty in general,
and the disciplines that make up the faculty. These provide a focus at
the discourse and sentence level for language instruction, as well as
assisting students to better appreciate the values that structure their
studies and shape their learning.
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Introduction
It is well-established that language learning is most
successful when contextualized to the particular setting in which the
language will function, and for which its development is required. This
is because the values and the way of viewing the world of the
particular setting are shared between the parties involved in the acts
of communication. These values impact on and shape the language
of successful communication. Thus, the language learner is not focusing
on isolated and unconnected linguistic operations, but participating in
meaningful communicative acts; the language and hence the communication
are operating as a social practice. In the higher education
setting in Australia which includes a large number of international and
local students for whom English is a second language, the further
development of students’ English language continues as they undertake
their studies. This is especially so in relation to the development of
written language, which is largely the form through which students’
academic development is assessed. As such, further written language
development means assisting students to communicate effectively in
their disciplinary studies.
In this article, the values of successful written communication in a
business faculty are explored through a study that investigated these
from the perspectives of the teachers. As a business faculty is
comprised of a number of disciplines of study, students need to be
cognizant of and operate within the values and assumptions of the
business context in general, as well as those of the particular
disciplines. Drawing on the findings from the study, the purpose of
this article is to discuss a program to assist students’ written
language development in the context of their disciplinary studies. The
advantage of the approach outlined is that, in addition to the
development of students’ language skills, their understandings of the
values that underpin the discourses of their disciplines are enhanced.
Thus, students’ overall learning is assisted.
Language and Communication Development in Context
The view that language operates as a social practice acknowledges that
meaning (or reality) in different settings is based on the values and
relationships of the participants in that setting (Bruffee 1986; Swales
1990). Furthermore, according to Lave and Wenger (1991),
knowledge and learning are situated, and learning develops from
experience and social action. The community’s shared meanings shape
communication, and community members learn to communicate in ways that
will be understood by other members of the community.
In relation to academic disciplines of study, Becher’s (1989)
well-accepted view is that knowledge and the discipline’s culture are
intertwined. Becher (1989) explains that, for instance, in a discipline
such as science, the development of knowledge is linear, and for a
humanities discipline, it tends to be more recursive (Becher, 1989).
Bizzell (1992) and Beaufort (1997) refer to such a setting as a
discourse community, where shared meanings reflect community-based
norms and expectations. These are embedded in discourse conventions,
which, in turn, reflect the community’s work. Therefore, as Lea and
Stierer (2000) state, writing in higher education is shaped by the
cultural setting in which the written communication occurs.
To sum up and as Hyland (2002) also explains, successful communication
is based on community members selecting ways to present their ideas
that make sense to, and can be understood, by their readers. He
explains that different disciplines have different views of knowledge,
research, practices and ways of seeing the world that are reflected in
diverse forms of argumentation and expression. In relation
to academic literacies, Lea and Street (1997) also maintain that the
values are mediated through the parties of the staff as the teachers in
the disciplines, the students, and the institution, which represents
power and authority. Lea and Street (1997) point out that students’
writing problems reflect a gap between staff expectations of what
constitutes successful writing, and those of the students.
Language and Communication in a Business Disciplinary Setting
A recent study in which the author was a researcher and which produced
the data for this article, was completed in a business faculty in an
Australian university. The study explored the expectations of teaching
staff in terms of what constitutes successful student writing in
assessment tasks (Crosling, 2005, provides a fuller explanation of the
study). These expectations relate to a business faculty in general, and
also to its disciplines, which are Accounting and Finance; Business Law
and Taxation; Econometrics and Business Statistics; Economics;
Management; and Marketing. The subject leaders of large subjects across
the faculty disciplines were surveyed, and asked to rank on a scale of
1 – 5, with 1 being the lowest and 5 being the highest, the importance
of a list of indicators for successful writing in their disciplines. A
total of 125 subject leaders were invited to complete the survey, and
more than 60 percent of these responded.
The list of indicators used in the survey was developed from a
literature survey of the characteristics of academic writing. The
indicators were: addressing the task; establishing a clear purpose in
the written piece; formulating an unambiguous response;
developing/explaining a response logically; concluding clearly;
presenting information in a coherent and logical way; adapting
data/information to meet the reader’s needs; supporting points with
evidence from research and/or data; using clear English expression;
using correct grammar, spelling and syntax; using suitable referencing
techniques.
The results of this study provide a profile of the characteristics of
successful writing in general in the business faculty, as well as
expected forms across the faculty’s disciplines. In turn, these
characteristics are very useful in assisting students in language
development programs for the academic business context.
The survey results indicate that at the faculty level, the following
characteristics of written communication are most important:
- Presenting information in a
coherent and concise way
- Addressing the task
- Developing and explaining a
response logically
- Establishing a clear purpose in
the written piece
- Supporting points with evidence
from research and/or data.
When the descriptors are investigated individually across the
disciplines, some
similarities and differences emerge. Table 1 below summarises the
higher ranking indicators for each of the disciplines, in priority
order.
Discipline
|
Higher Scoring Descriptors
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Accounting and
Finance
|
- Addressing task
- Coherent and concise expression of information
- Logical development/explanation of response
- Clear conclusion
- Clear purpose
|
Business Law and
Taxation
|
- Logical development/explanation of response
- Clear English expression
- Clear conclusion
- Coherent and concise expression of information
- Points supported with research/data/evidence
|
Economics
|
- Coherent and concise expression of information
- Addressing task
- Logical development/explanation of response
- Clear conclusion
|
Econometrics and
Business Statistics
|
- Points supported with research/data/evidence
- Data/information adapted to meet reader’s needs
- Coherent and concise expression of information
- Clear purpose
|
Management
|
- Points supported with research/data evidence
- Clear purpose
- Addressing task
- Logical development/explanation of response
|
Marketing
|
- Clear conclusion
- Coherent and concise expression of information
- Addressing task
- Clear purpose
- Unambiguous response
- Logical development /explanation of response
- Points supported with research/data evidence
|
Table 1: Faculty Disciplines and Higher Rating Descriptors
It can be seen from Table 1 above that the highest four indicators
across the disciplines are similar to the general faculty expectations
for written communication discussed earlier. For instance, “Coherent
and concise expression of information” is placed in the higher rankings
by all but the Business Law and Taxation discipline. “Logical
development/expression of information” is a high ranking indicator in
all disciplines except for Econometrics and Business Statistics.
“Clear purpose in the written piece” is high in all but the disciplines
of Economics, and Business Law and Taxation. These indicators may be
interpreted as a common core across the faculty disciplines. For the
purposes of this study, the indicators have not been classified beyond
a descriptor level. However, the potential exists to group and further
categorize these descriptors for additional purposes.
The next section in this article discusses the way that the particular
preferences across the business disciplines reflect their practices and
purposes, and thus their values, or ways of looking at the world.
The Indicators as Values of the Business Discipline1
As mentioned previously, some of the indicators occur across the
disciplines of the faculty. This suggests that they reflect the desired
characteristics for writing in a business faculty in general. The major
and basic function of business has been explained as obtaining
financial return for time, effort and capital expended
(Wikipedia-Business, 2004). In this context, the indicators fulfill a
purpose in terms of efficient and purpose-driven business operations.
“Concise and coherent expression” means that information is conveyed
efficiently and directly, saving time and cost. This function is also
served for both the writer and the reader by a written piece that
addresses its task. “Logical development/explanation of a response”
contributes to the achievement of efficacious communication; a logical
structure is convincing in that it conforms to the expectations of
logic often held by people with western backgrounds and outlooks
(Risbett, 2003). It also demonstrates a sense of purpose and is
therefore efficient, as well as indicating a sense of professionalism,
direction, and competence. For instance, a discourse structure that
makes a point, and then explains and provides evidence is direct and
does not require the reader to use high levels of inference. It leaves
less room for unintended reader interpretations and is thus efficient.
An example of such a structure is as follows:
“The
major advantage of this process is that ……………. This is achieved through
several steps, where the first is ………….”.
The above structure may be compared with the following:
“The
first step was to ….., which provided the benefit of …………. This was
followed by …. Thus, the major advantage of this process is that
………..”.
The findings from the survey show that Marketing is the only discipline
to rate “Formulating an unambiguous response” highly. When considered
in relation to Marketing practice which in general is concerned with
developing and marketing products to meet consumers’ needs, and
creating consumers’ needs through products, this indicator takes on
meaning. A product must unambiguously be presented as the best,
creating a view in the consumer’s mind that it is best able to meet
their needs, and therefore warranting purchase. For instance, a
sentence structure such as: “The car is safe and economical to run.” is
less ambiguous and more direct that the following example: “While some
other cars have varying degrees of safety, this one is also economical
to run.”.
Business Law and Taxation includes the indicator of “Clear English
expression” as a high ranking descriptor. Such a strong emphasis can be
understood in a setting where law is made and enacted through language.
A major disciplinary practice is that law is precisely established
following its close examination in relation to the facts of a
situation. Clear use of language assists close and accurate
interpretation and communication. The inclusion of “Points supported by
research/data/evidence” as higher ranking also accords with the
discipline’s practice of arriving at legal decisions following analysis
of a situation’s facts in relation to the law. An example of this
practice reflected in language is:
“An
offer has clearly been made by Arthur to sell his antique desk to Harry
for $3,000. The first question is whether Harry’s reply was a
counter-offer, or a request for further information. If it was a
counter offer, then, as was held in the case …., it amounted to a
rejection of Arthur’s offer. Arthur’s offer would therefore have
terminated, and there would have been no contract” (from Crosling and
Murphy, 2000).
Econometrics and Business Statistics is concerned with collecting and
analyzing data for business purposes. Thus, the inclusion at the higher
level of importance of “Adapting data to meet the reader’s needs” can
be understood. Data needs to be presented in a way that meets the needs
of the party by whom it is required. The inclusion of clear purpose
complements such a client-based approach. A client-based approach
is also evident in the higher scoring indicators for Accounting and
Finance, where “Addressing the task”, “Clear purpose” and “Clear
conclusion” all relate to such activity. For instance, a report in
these disciplines is expected to explicitly express its purpose: “The
aim of this report is to ……” is a commonly-used structure.
In Economics, the presence of “Logical development of a response” and
“Clear conclusion” as desired attributes in writing can be explained in
relation to the discipline’s practices. The activity and credibility of
hypotheses formation, which is intrinsic to economic analysis, is based
on logical development of a response. Presentation and justification
for hypotheses is dependent on the use of conditional language
structures and modality, as well as the use of connective words and
phrases to explain cause and affect processes. An example of an
expected structure of information is seen in the following:
“The
supply of ….. is dependent on ……… If the …… rises, then …….. This
results in ………. and ……….. On the other hand, …………...”
Language Development Programs in the Context of Higher
Education Studies
International students who gain positions in higher education in
Australia need to meet a prescribed level of English language
competence. For international students, as for all commencing students,
higher education is a new experience, requiring students to make
transitions to new ways of approaching knowledge and learning. However,
the stage of transition can be more problematic for international
students, who also have to adjust to a range of other life changes.
These include a different country and culture, as well as teaching and
learning in English as a second language. At the same time, the
disciplines in which students take their studies have their own
requirements, to which students must adjust for success. Given these
pressures, it is not surprising that international students may require
support with English language while they undertake their studies.
As a consequence of the heavy workload in higher education studies and
perhaps because of the greater amount of time required to access their
subject materials in English which is most often not their first
language, it is not always feasible to expect students to also
undertake language development programs. This is despite the fact that
they would assist some students to study more efficiently and
effectively. Thus, the suggestions for language development programs
put forward in this article contextualize language to the students’
disciplines of study. While students are being acquainted with
appropriate approaches to study for these disciplines, language
development can also occur. For instance, a seminar may be held for
students on researching and writing their first assignment in a
particular subject. In elucidating on the values that shape the
discipline’s culture and thus successful writing, students can also
receive instruction that will further develop their language skills.
This approach is explained in the next section of this article.
Teaching Language and Written Communication in the Business
Disciplinary Context
As mentioned in the previous section, an academic support program which
includes pre-assignment-submission seminars, provides a forum for
students’ language development.
The indicators of successful written communication examined above for
the business faculty in general and for the particular disciplines
provide guidance, and a focus, for discipline-specific language
programs. The indicators can readily be interpreted in terms of
discourse and sentence structures, and the grammatical forms inherent
in these can function to strengthen students’ English language skills.
Furthermore, the indicators can be positioned and explained as
fulfilling a purpose in the disciplinary value system. Thus, students
study language forms and structures that are not isolated and
disembodied, but reflect a particular value of the setting. Students’
written language development is thus authentic and has
meaning. A further advantage of this approach is that the
contextualization of the language forms assists students to understand
better and become increasingly cognizant of, and initiated into, the
values of the disciplines, which shape their learning.
Turning more specifically to some of the general faculty indicators
outlined in the previous section, the indicator of “Presenting
information in a coherent and concise way” provides the opportunity for
focus on language features such as discourse and sentence structure.
Relevant forms are relative clauses, nominalization, and noun phrases.
These condense information and facilitate succinct expression. For
coherence, consideration in the program of connecting words and
phrases, their functions and usage, forces a consideration of coherence
in a written text at the discourse level, and across sentences. The
focus on students’ understanding of the appropriate use of anaphoric
references also aids text coherence.
The indicator of “Establishing a clear purpose in the written piece”
provides an opportunity for consideration of and instruction about
sentence structure. It may be seen that active rather than passive
sentence structure contributes to a sense of purpose, and thus both may
be explored and contrasted in terms of function and grammatical
structure. At the discourse level, this indicator also provides
relevance for the organization of academic written expression where the
thesis statement, which encapsulates the purpose of the text, is
provided early in the written piece, and often in the introduction.
Thus, text organization can be a focus at this point.
The indicator of “Supporting points with evidence or data” provides the
opportunity for discussion of the academic practice of academic
enquiry, as well as the introduction of language forms for providing
such evidence. For instance, a structure such as “As Lee (2003)
states…”, leads to discussion of the function and structure of
adverbial clauses. At the semantic level, the relative strength of
reporting verbs can be discussed. These include verbs such as “argue”,
“suggest”, and “point out” which are commonly used in author-prominent
structures to introduce citations in academic writing.
Turning now to some of the discipline-specific indicators, for the
Marketing discipline, the indicator of “Formulating an unambiguous
response”, while revealed at the discourse level through the structure
of the written piece, may also be seen as reflected in unambiguous
sentence structures. Thus, language exploration can focus on sentence
structures that are unambiguous, as well as ambiguous. (An example has
been provided earlier in this article.)
An indicator that is required in writing in the Business Law field is
“Clear written expression”. While this may be interpreted in many ways,
it can be seen as expression that is uncluttered and relatively simple
in form. This would be in line with the recent movement in the legal
world for ‘plain legal English”. Thus, sentences which do not include
many relative clauses may be compared with those that do, opening up
the discussion about the grammatical structure and function of these.
This situation leads to discussion of sentences that are largely
composed of one main idea (a subject, a verb and an object), compared
to those that co-ordinate and subordinate information.
In the Economics field where the indicators of “logical development of
a response” and “Forming a clear conclusion” have been noted as desired
characteristics, the logical development of a response includes
hypothesising from given to future situations. This situation provides
a forum for discussion of conditional language structures and modality,
as well as at the discourse level, connecting words and phrases for
cause and effect explanations. It also allows for a language focus on
subordination and co-ordination in and across sentences, before
arriving at a conclusion which is therefore clear. Relevant here is the
example provided earlier in this article.
Further Implications for Student Learning
This article has put forward the view that language teaching for
students whose first language is not English in the higher education
setting may be contextualized to the disciplines in which students
undertake their studies. An outcome of this approach is that students
explore and receive instruction about the language forms that are
expected by established members of the particular disciplines, as well
as being able to strengthen their appreciation of the values. In turn,
as these values are reflected in the approach to disciplinary knowledge
and successful thought patterns, the process of making these explicit
assists students in their disciplinary learning. These values also
shape successful study as disciplinary patterns are reflected in
disciplinary actions, from the organization of information in text
books, to the organization and structure of spoken discourse practice
(Crosling, 1996).
Another positive outcome of the approach outlined in this article
is that the language learning foci serve an immediate purpose for the
students as they are required for successful communication in the
discipline. Thus, students’ motivation to master the particular
discourse and language structures is enhanced. This is because these
practices apply to and take on meaning in the disciplinary setting,
rather than operating as disembodied language requirements.
Conclusion
In terms of concurrent language development for students in higher
education, this article has discussed the results of a study of
teachers’ expectations for written communication in a business faculty.
These expectations provide a context for language development programs.
Because the language development occurs as the values of a discipline
are explained in relation to written assignment expectations, it is
relevant to students’ needs. It also assists them to better understand
their subjects and disciplinary fields. While this article has explored
some of the discourse and sentence level structures relevant to the
indicators derived from the study, the list is exemplary rather than
categorical.
International students in higher education do often require English
language support and, as time is often a luxury, efficient means
to achieve this are required. This article has outlined one approach
which provides the support, and also further assists students in their
disciplinary studies.
Footnote
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